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![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (2)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/img_disagree_large@2x-1882f32c83eb60deb0374abb341238b706487901793b65fcd3b92db46c08b0f9.png "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (2)")
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18 Dec 2017
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At the start of this movie, there is a white feather flying in the sky back and forth with amazing background music, and it wouldn't fall on the ground. Once, it falls on the shoulder of a man walking by, but then, wind blows and the feather flies again and goes under a car running, finally landing on the shoe of a man.
This man is Forrest, Forrest Gump. He was sitting on a bench and looking back on his life.
When he was a child, he was not able to walk sufficiently without leg braces. In addition, his IQ (intelligence quotient) was 75, so he had many handicaps at the start of his life.
This is why he was sometimes bullied by his classmates and had no
friends, except for a girl who didn't look down on him in his school. Her name was Jenny. In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest of friends.
One day, he was being bullied by classmates, and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them, "Run! Forest! Run!!" he began to ran for the first time. His leg braces gradually broke down, and when the instrument was completely broken down, he ran and ran faster than any other child, and they all were not able to catch Forest Gump.
In part of the first scene of this movie, Forrest said, "You want a
chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these." I
thought...he lied, didn't he?
Needless to say, it is too mach for a man to eat that number of chocolates. However, he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr. Pepper, and when he was
chased by his classmates (this time they went after him with their jeep), Forrest was nevertheless able to escape from them on foot. Because of his incredible running speed, he won admission to the University of Alabama.
Also, after that, he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats. In his childhood, the odd dance of Forrest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis
Presley's gyrating dance, and it became famous soon after that.
When he was a University Student, he meet President Kennedy, as a football player on the American National team.
The president asked him, "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?" and he answered, "I gotta Pee"．
How fearless he was!
After that, he entered the army, and went to the Vietnam War. Serving his
many teammates's life there, he received the Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war. This time, he showed his hip to TV cameras.
He was made to participate in an anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech. Additionally, he was forced to join the Black Panther Party (because of Jenny) to serve African American rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team, so Forrest played matches of table tennis with top Chinese players.
After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his friend who died in the Vietnam War. Believe it or not, Bubba Gump Shrimp Co. and more than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our world.
Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed.
He ran across America more than four times with much of his company.
What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No, you may
not believe it, but Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man. Although he had friends, Tex, Dallas, and other characteristic people, and only had incredible energy.
"Forrest Gump" is a war film, but also a success story, human drama, and love romance.
Also, is this a Science Fiction? No, it isn't. But in the original work of Forest Gump (novel version), he traveled the Universe with…a monkey.
I Love this story. He can do anything by himself. I'm inspired by it.
I'm moved that he can give half of his achievement to the people who buckup him as token.
Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man, but I know what love
is," I admire him.
The people around him are also attractive. I must admit that the place where they are living is fictional, but simultaneously and actually, I can
hear their breathing.
It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression, I feel people may shed tears for another something．
It seems that this story is constructed so that all kinds of people can enjoy it, but in a sense, I thought people become one when they are moved by this film
as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. This movie made me feel so.
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![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (4)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/mongasama_hat_blue-4279b5b8d766ce82056aaa7153e0e4b796c356b6cb2049fd4f88c16b9bf2afae.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (4)")
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![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (5)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw== "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (5)")
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![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (5)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/icon_answer_not_helpful_feedback_clearly_wrong-c991c059081f7134101300b3bffb2f7fb98dc3dada1bb0569e4a888c62cdc6fc.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (5)"){kind=icon}
Obviously wrong![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (6)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/icon_answer_not_helpful_feedback_lacking_explanation-c22cfaccdec531718e866075461ff46a0f3df0c2ee562709a431a24083b07584.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (6)"){kind=icon}
Explanation is not enough![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (7)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/icon_answer_not_helpful_feedback_language_not_understandable-5cefb10b8b3cd73522a5eed16f9c7d75eb2ffd12bbc43d9f89627961429eca37.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (7)"){kind=icon}
Written in a language I can't understand![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (8)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/icon_answer_not_helpful_feedback_not_related_to_question-1aba9af5bf8301744011cf75aa65a58637ee5ee08abb8691af9217833b7e78c9.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (8)"){kind=icon}
Answer is not related to the question![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (9)](https://i0.wp.com/cdn.hinative.com/assets/icon_answer_not_helpful_feedback_others-29e9f2a355b43117e3ffa98233e4dba090295b182b90f82f5c17e2075482a5ca.svg "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (9)"){kind=icon}
Other reason![I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. "Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (11)](https://i0.wp.com/ogp-v2.hinative.com/ogp/question?dlid=22&l=en-US&lid=22&txt=%E2%80%8EI+watched+the+movie%2C+Forrest+Gump.And+I+wrote+following+composition.I+do+want+this+composition+become+more+better+one+as+if+++++%0A+person+living+in+USA+wrote.Can+you+Please+proofread+this.%0A%0AThe+sta...&ctk<k=english_us&qt=FreeQuestion&w=1200 "I watched the movie, Forrest Gump.And I wrote following composition.I do want this composition become more better one as if person living in USA wrote.Can you Please proofread this. The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky back and force with amaging background music, it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went through under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man. The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump. He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life. When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had many handicaps at the start of his life. Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his school. Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the closest friends each other. One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him escape from them「Run! Forest! Run!!」He began to ran for the first time. and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children ,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump. The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said \"You want a chocolate? \"I\" could eat about a million and a half of these.\"I thought ...he made a lie,didnt he? Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates. but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep], Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs]. and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission to University of Alabama． Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved various incredible feats． In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that. When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As football player in American National team. President asked him \"Congratulations, how does it feel to be an All-American?\",He answered \"I gotta Pee\"． How fearless he was! After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras. He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny) to serve african american rights. President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top players. After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with his hriend dead in Bietnum war,. (Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.) Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed. He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company. What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man, Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and only had incredible energy. \"Forrest Gump\" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance. Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a monkey. I Love this story. He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it. I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who buckup him as token. Having seen what he said,\"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love is.\",I admire him a little. The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can hear their breathing.？ It is said that this film also expresses American history. So watching the film and shedding tears of impression,People may shed tears for another something． It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy. but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so. (11)")
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